Cut! OK, that was pretty good. I like the intense sky and lighting placement. Now ... this director needs a bit more emotion emanating from your voice ... think how these are the last few moments of your eyesight before the curtain falls ... the weeping cherry is your last vision ... is achingly beautiful ... it's a weeping cherry that brings you to tears ... Pavarotti singing in the background ... something from Verdi perhaps, ... I need you to cry while you describe the weeping cherry ... can you give me lachrymose? Good. Excellent. OK, people ... TAKE TWO! I love this job.